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Old 02-29-2008, 12:14 PM   #1
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Toon Elephant

Hi,

Here is my progress on a new project:




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Old 02-29-2008, 02:24 PM   #2
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That looks great so far! Very clean wires!!!
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Old 02-29-2008, 02:34 PM   #3
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yep extra clean wire, glad to see u back here on the wip section

about the general shape: feets bases are too square imo and the tail just a bit too long but just a little, maybe add an extra loop on the tail base

funny at each time u post a wip i think : "hum...his work get closer and closer to his wife style" and be sure it's a compliment in my mouth
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Old 02-29-2008, 04:52 PM   #4
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Re: Toon Elephant

Hello... Super clean model and alot of potential here... Just a thought this is... what is this for? Because I think he could be more fun in a way... if you look at the frontal view he looks kinda strickt and abit scary? can one just Dumpo him alittle or is that wrong due to the final idea of him? http://www.wallpaperspecial.com/wall...mbo/Dumbo4.jpg

I think he would be cooler if he were dumboed and qutied abit! Massive toenails he got too?

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Nice use of the geometry, simple yet very expressive !

I do agree with PAL, there's a lot of potential in this object. Do you plan on doing some expression morphs ?
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Old 03-13-2008, 06:36 PM   #6
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Re: Toon Elephant

Hi Guys,

Thankyou for your replies.

@ JeffrySG:

Thank you, I try to keep wires clean.

@ Alien:

Thank you, I value your opinion. Good to be back posting on here I have made some changes. Hope you like.

I love Lisa's style. Lisa has a rare gift and if anything I model can even come close, I am very happy

@ PAL:

Thank you, I was trying to steer clear of the dumbo look, sorry Pal. Going more for the doe eyed look of a cute animal. I may add lashes.

@ Weetos:

Thank you, yeah, still early days on this model. Some tweeking and ofcourse, the Texture maps. Will try dome morphs definitly

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Old 03-14-2008, 04:36 AM   #7
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cool update Dave, only one think who bother me.......because i know u can do a LOT better.....this awful photoshop filter
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Old 03-15-2008, 04:05 PM   #8
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I love the last render!! It's very good!!
The soft details are very good!!
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Re: Toon Elephant

He's very cute! Clean lines too. Shouldn't his toes be a different color though? Just a thought.
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Old 03-16-2008, 07:43 PM   #10
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OK! It looks cool, but create it so that the front view is not all that scary then... hmmmm.... the last render is more dumbo and it looks cooler to me... is there only texture work on there or did you alter the model as well?

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